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May 17, 2007

THE FIRST LADY OF LIMN

Michikokakutani1sizedSpeaking of reviews and reviewers, we wondered if we were merely imagining Michiko Kakutani's absolutely relentless overuse of "limn" - it shows up in the first paragraph of her review of Falling Man - so we took a trip back into the archives to see just how bad it really is.   This is as far as we got until boredom overtook us:

The Post Birthday World: "... Ms. Shriver’s instinctive knowledge of her heroine’s heart and mind and her ability to limn Irina’s very different relationships ... "

Theories of Everything:  " ... her capacity to limn everything from the existential and Dada-esque  ..."

Collected Stories, Saul Bellow:   " ... attempts to limn the last days of an alcoholic frontierswoman  ... "

Emergence: "But ''Emergence'' does limn some of its burgeoning manifestations."

Getting a Life:  " ... funny and disturbing stories that limn the middle- and upper-middle-class world of London ... "

Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close:   " ... using his copious gifts of language to limn his characters' state of mind."

Love:  " ... Ms. Morrison employs the sort of didactic language she used in the ham-handed ''Paradise'' to limn the women's relationships to each other ... "

Brotherhood of the Bomb:  " ... he fails to fully limn the social and geopolitical fallout ... "

A Simple Habana Melody:  " ... empathize with his characters and to limn their inner lives ... "

The Black Veil:  " ... eye for social detail that enable him to limn the discontents of his childhood ... "

The Doctor's House:  " ... demonstrated the author's ability to limn her characters' inner lives ... "

Hateship, Friendship, Courtship, Loveship, Marriage: " ... Ms. Munro has created tales that limn entire lifetimes in a handful of pages ... "

John Adams: " ... his political sounding board and most trusted confidant, limn a marriage of enduring passion ... "

Back When We Were Grownups:  " ... used her generous gifts of compassion to limn the interior lives of Rebecca and her family ... "

Speaking with the Angel:  " ... the author's pitch-perfect ear for how people talk to limn a man's sudden apprehension of vulnerability and loss ... "

The First American: " ... never penetrates Franklin's placid demeanor to limn his inner life ... "

There's more, people ... oh, there's so much more.  We've merely limned the ... oh, never mind.

Posted by TEV at 12:09 AM in Words Fail |

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Dennis Johnson had the same idea 5 years ago: http://www.mobylives.com/Limning_Kakutani.html

Posted by: Sarah | May 17, 2007 at 05:13 AM

It must be in her contract, just as there must be a rule that every issue of the NYTBR uses the word "brio" at least once.

Posted by: K.G. Schneider | May 17, 2007 at 05:27 AM

Blame it on the fricking Limn-Council. Ever since the '00 election, where they donated at the Ranger level, it's been the high-fructose corn syrup of book review verbs. I noticed it popping up in the blurbs on my kids' Scholastic Books order forms.

Posted by: Ken | May 17, 2007 at 06:53 AM

Sigh. I love her.

Posted by: Jimmy Beck | May 17, 2007 at 09:54 AM

2002? Was anyone reading blogs then? (I wasn't, so forgive the duplication.)

Posted by: TEV | May 17, 2007 at 10:31 AM

Reminds of when Frank Gifford was in the booth at Monday Night Football and someone pointed out that the Old Trojan opined "This is a real hard-hitting football game" every single game. He never said it again.

Posted by: Jim | May 17, 2007 at 11:39 AM

There's one word Ms Kakutani uses twice as often as 'limn,' and it's 'dazzling.'

--Limn/-ed/-ing = 70ish times since 1985
--Dazzling = 150ish times since 1981

Posted by: Paul | May 17, 2007 at 05:59 PM

There was a great "NB" column in the Times Literary Supplement a few months ago proposing a retirement of "limn" from their reviews.

Posted by: Kevin | May 18, 2007 at 09:48 AM

That's fucking hysterical.

Posted by: Anna Clark | May 18, 2007 at 10:18 AM

(scribbling serious note to self)
Avoid depending on verbal crutches....

Posted by: Celia Hayes | May 19, 2007 at 11:49 AM

Equally annoying is Michiko's overuse of "stunning" and "dazzling" whenever she wants to praise a book.

Posted by: Sarah | May 20, 2007 at 05:09 AM

There limn and then I also grow weary of book reviews with "spare language." It all leads one to think that there must be a program for reviewers. Put in the title, a couple of character names, a plot (usually provided by the PR department of the publisher), place. There you go. Then fill in a few more blanks and there is your book review.

Posted by: Lyn Lejeune | May 20, 2007 at 01:10 PM

This is too funny!

Brought back memories of a good segment on NPR's Fresh Air by linguist Geoffrey Nunberg on use of the word "roil."

After I heard that segment years ago, I still see the word pop up everywhere -- even in fiction. And no, I don't read Gothic romances or porn which are the only places Nunberg says he sees the word spring up in fiction.

Here's a link to the piece. Makes for a good read:

http://www.ischool.berkeley.edu/~nunberg/roil.html

Posted by: Poornima | May 21, 2007 at 05:29 PM

She went out on a limn and you sawed it off.
Or:
She might need to see a prosthetics specialist for a new limn.

Posted by: BlogDog | May 30, 2007 at 08:14 AM

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