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March 05, 2007

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Andrew Karre

Long comment for a long post . . .

This is an interesting approach . . . Though I don't think any of Nabokov's novels tend toward a "moral apotheosis" as James Ray Jr. suggests, I do think applying your method to his PNIN might also be really interesting--perhaps even more so than to Lolita. I'm thinking particularly of this passage:

"In order to exist rationally, Pnin had taught himself, during the last ten years, never to remember Mira Belochkin--not becasue, in itself, the evocation of a youthful love affair, banal and brief, threatened his peace of mind (alas, recollections of his marriage to Liza were imperious enough to crowd out any former romance), but because, if one were quite sincere with oneself, no conscience, and hence no consciousness, could be expected to subsist in a world where such things as Mira's death were possible. One had to foget--because one could not live with the thought that this graceful, fragile, tender young woman with those eyes, that smile, those gardens and snows in the background, had been brought in a cattle car to an extermination camp and killed by an injection of phenol into the heart, into the gentle heart one had heard beating under one's lips in the dusk of the past. And since the exact form of her death had not been recorded, Mira kept dying a great number of deaths in one's mind, and undergoing a great number of resurrections, only to die again and again, led away by a trained nurse, inoculated with filth, tetanus bacilli, broken glass, gassed in a sham shower bath with prussic acid, burned alive in a pit on a gasoline-soaked pile of beechwood."

I think these lines are some of his most powerful, particularly: ". . . if one were quite sincere with oneself, no conscience, and hence no consciousness, could be expected to subsist in a world where such things as Mira's death were possible."

janitorman

"Style and Structure are the essence of a book; great ideas are hogwash." -VN

So, then, what unwavering moral vision?

Josh

Janitorman and Andrew --

I don't think, Janitorman, that the preeminence of style and structure in VN's notion of good books precluded a moral vision. They preclude evaluation of a good book soley on its "moral," but not its morality. As he says in introducing his Lectures on Literature, the great writer is, among the storyteller and the enchanter, also a teacher. He'd give that status a lower rung on the totem pole, but he still included it.

Thanks for that passage from PNIN, Andrew. I'd forgotten it -- or more accurately, hadn't read it close enough to have remembered. It is a knockout.
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janitorman

Josh, I don't entirely disagree. We don't have to have great ideas to have a moral vision. Just look at... Oh, forget it: I'm not going to get into politics.

The quotation itself is something of a conceit as VN said or wrote over the years many things that seemed at least a little contradictory -- witness what you mentioned, what he wrote in the novel's afterword versus his later letters.

I just don't know about discussing "Lolita" in moral terms. I mean, VN always insisted it was just a story. Having read it the first go without having read any analysis of it at all, I thought it was a story about the all-consuming destructive power of obsession -- the context, though salacious, was less relevant, for me. And I think we have to consider that VN tranforming the nymphet into the lamp-lit bare arm may not be the author in his solid morality saving a little girl from an evil man, but just because it came out funny that way.

Several years ago, a couple things I read that VN and Borges wrote about writing -- I'm sure they contradicted themselves at some point or another -- greatly changed the way I think about books and the process of creating them. One of those was the style/structure thing. The Borges thing, I wantonly paraphrase, was that introducing some concept and then spending a lot of time explaining it so that it seems believable -- science fiction writers revel in this -- is just a waste of time. What Borges said to me, if not to anyone else, is that the contract between writer and reader stipulates the writer will provide story, believable or not, and reader will suspend disbelief. And the reader has to fulfill his terms of the contract. Therefore no chapter-long explanations of trivia.

Those are about the only two things I think about when I write; maybe that's taking the easy way out.

Josh

Janitorman --

I think that's taking the hard-way in, not the easy-way out. Chapter-long explanations of trivia are easy and not all that interesting. I suspect your approach is capable of reaping a lot of reward. I remember (uh-oh, workshop topic again) the WORST workshop I ever attended, and a dude there who'd written a story sort of opposite from the "explanation of trivia" model that tends to prevail around those tables, meaning basically he'd sublimated the story he was telling so thoroughly that it was incomprehensible. Bad, but in a different, more respectable way. There was no exposition, not so much as a narrative street direction, and while it failed, I remember that story for its conviction, and I bet the writer's gone on to do better and better things. I'm going to try to respond in depth to the MFA debate I started in a later comment, but that's certainly one of the degree's failings: it too often assumes complete stupidity in the reader.

nnyhav

I think the narrational complexities serve in part to depict moral complexities: It is a deep concern across Nabokov's writings, in which exile and expropriation are consistent themes. The main thread of Lolita, Humbert's expropriation of Dolores Haze's life, is echoed not only by Quilty's toying with Humbert but also by John Ray Jr.'s expropriation of Humbert's life story (with amendment: there's a time discrepancy at the end that suggests tinkering to impose a redemptive moral upon the story). As with philosophy, the cumulative argument does not just depend on its parts, it also frames the interpretation of those parts, with local argumentation often exploring contrary directions (did Socrates invent the red herring?); but interpretation is itself part and parcel of novelistic discourse. Dogmatists are the more inclined to be concerned about moral issues in fiction, eliding all such nuance to pronounce upon what is portrayed (and to judge the text as unambiguous moral message, and the author as rightthinking or perverse). Should it be any surprise that this 'debate' isn't engaged?

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